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A moonlight stroll
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A moonlight stroll |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
A pale moon peeks cautiously over the eastern horizon, admiring its reflection in emerald waters. Hungry waves claw ravenously at struggling sand, reclaiming lost ground. Determined wind chases fleeing breakers, scattering salty spray across huddling dunes. A night bird cries, the sound lingers, then is lost in ocean's chorus. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a scene! very vivid! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 NICE! thanks for sharing this moonlight strollBTW, nice to meet you! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Quite a visual scene... nice job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
passing shadows thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoyed it. Midnitesun you're welcome and it's a pleasure to meet you too!  Ringo thanks for taking the time to read you have all made me feel very welcome here. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Aaaaaw Eddles I loved the imagery here! "Hungry waves claw ravenously at struggling sand, reclaiming lost ground." This is my favorite part...I never looked at it like that before!!! ~hugs~ Great write as always! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A "Moonlight Stroll" par excellence! A very pleasurable reading experience! Love & Light, EA |
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