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Open Poetry #25
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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
0 posted 2003-04-04 10:14 AM


Clinically fixated
on what i feel is fate
replacing what bones i thought were flexible
into silent blood

I am too far into fear
to reinsert the remedy
of you being unapproachable by my eyes pain
mute water falls

Hope is my daily gruel
thinning by your ignorance
levelling the soil over my ability to mourn
i've not yet lost you.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.
© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2003-04-04 10:30 AM

Thought provoking ....
   a sense of time passed but not yet over,
     perhaps even re-kindled if given a chance.

                T.G.I.F.!!  
Hope your weekend shares something special.
          (same time next week?)
                  
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-04-04 10:55 AM

Hi Gemma!!  

Is your computer still broke. I'm missing
you around here. I love your poems...and
your replies to me keep me encouraged...

You already know that I love your poem. I
haven't seen any of yours that I don't.

Have a good weekend , friend....
Heart Hugs,
Ethel
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-04-04 11:20 AM

gemjop - many thoughts in these words, telling write...

BC
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-04-05 04:23 PM

Hope is my daily gruel
thinning by your ignorance

You've become a master of images, you just get better everyday
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
5 posted 2003-04-05 05:11 PM

I have missed viewing your grace and beauty here. I am thankful for your words...as always they are wonderful.
Eric
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-04-06 05:36 AM

Very nice...James
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