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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2003-04-04 07:35 AM


A sonnet is fourteen lines in any of several fixed verse or rhyme schemes,
characteristically expressing a single theme or Idea.

So for an exercise I took a simple set of fourteen lines as a starting place,
And twisted it’s shape.
Follow along, if you care to…


~Body of a Sonnet~

I hear her foot fall,
Striding in heels of black.
Coming down the hall,
I’m taken quite aback;
Leather torso filling
Ample bosom spilling
Over for eyes delight,
Carried by legs in silk
Face white as milk,
Vision that last into the night
I hear the passing footfalls
As they go quickly passed my door,
Another voice to her calls,
Still alone as I was before.

~Twisted Body of a Sonnet~

I hear her
foot falling, in heels of black.
She’s Striding
Coming down the darken hall,
Seeing her nothing of lack;
More filling
Leather torso with spilling
Ample bosom for delight,
legs in silk
Face as milk,
Vision that last into night
the passing
I hear footfalls as they go
quickly passed my door, I know,
Another voice
to her calls, she answers him
Still alone,
Alone as I was before.


~Twisting Further~

Noise on the wood steps out back
I hear her
foot falling, in Shades of black.
She’s Striding
Seeing there’s nothing she lacks;
Coming down the darken sprawl,
Cruel Riding,
Of taking them one and all.

Ample bosom for delight,
pale as milk,
Vision that last into night
Leather torso over fills,
legs in silk
panties of the finest frills

Longing fiery eye that kills
Lovers force,
images of her lusting that spills
to the ugly dark hiding
lost of choice,
lost of chance, but still abiding.

Lost fire.

I hear footfalls as they go
quickly passed my door, I know,
Another voice
to her calls, she answers him
Still alone,
Alone as I was before.

Gloom

a little something unearthed from past writings



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-04 09:15 AM



A little something?
Sigh.
Teach me.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-04-04 10:39 AM


Your talent is overwhelming..

Susan

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3 posted 2003-04-04 12:57 PM


wow! I loved the twisted ones....very very cool
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-04 01:01 PM


Just goes tashowya! The proof is in the poetry! You have one mighty fine, versatile mind! Thanks for the lesson, Dear Professor!

Warm hugs,
EA

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