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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-04-04 01:38 AM



It's the little things that count
like copper pennies in a well
a wish is just a wish
unlike the giving of ourselves.

We can hold our breath on high
and shade the sunlight from our eyes
we can dream a little dream
but we can't save our place in heaven.

The days will come and go
but what a difference they have made
grateful for this time
and the sharing of our souls.

If tomorrow never comes
I wanted you to know.

~*~

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1 posted 2003-04-04 01:41 AM


What a sweet and gentle way to say it! I love this.

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littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-04 02:14 AM


geez Blue - this is lovely - what a sweet soul you have and yes - so very true:

If tomorrow never comes
I wanted you to know.

what am amazingly simple thing which we tend to forget - thanks for reminding me . . . xxoo

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3 posted 2003-04-04 09:27 AM


BluesSerenade~

I REALLY enjoyed this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2003-04-04 09:54 AM


Great way to put across gentle thoughts...

regards,
sudhir

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-04-04 12:36 PM


BluesSerenade - this is a very priceless write. Many thoughts went into this...

BC

regards2you
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6 posted 2003-04-04 12:42 PM




Lori,

This is just precious! One word more about it would ruin the genuine feeling of it. Okay four more, so talented, you are!


Greatly enjoyed,
Hugs, Pat

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7 posted 2003-04-04 12:51 PM


awww...I like this so much, sort of reads like a song.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-04-04 12:58 PM


Your copper pennies are pure gold...

Lovely thoughts, lovely sentiments. A sweet and gentle write.

Love & Light,
EA

OLIAS
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9 posted 2003-04-04 12:59 PM


Penned with great style and grace, much enjoyed thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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