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JP
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Loomis, CA

0 posted 2003-04-04 12:47 PM



Breathe deep your cindery essence
Pursed lips release
flared nostrils recapture
your wisping brume
Entraptured by glowing crown
enlivened by billowing lust
hair set tingling
as you entwine within me
little white wand
of burning desire and need
let me glory in your pernicious spirit
let me breathe you yet again.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

© Copyright 2003 JP Burns - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-04-04 05:35 AM


well you seem to be in your prime this week

M

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2003-04-04 09:35 AM


nicely done...

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-04-04 09:53 AM



Gads, JP...you call this a choice?
Swoon.  Sigh.



        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
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4 posted 2003-04-10 05:35 PM


Smokin'

You do the most amazing things with poetry. Did I mention I'm glad you're around again?

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Nan
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5 posted 2003-04-11 09:26 PM


JP is on a roll....
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