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JP
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0 posted 2003-04-03 04:42 PM



Average day today
Careening thoughts assailing
Riddled dreams derailing
Overt desires compelling
Silent panics assaulting
Tantric needs defaulting
Intricate defeats exaulting
Creating an average day today

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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1 posted 2003-04-03 04:44 PM



Acrostically right!

Get your behind into Poetry Workshop...we could use you!

JP
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2 posted 2003-04-03 04:46 PM


I don't know... me and 'work' don't get along too well.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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3 posted 2003-04-03 05:48 PM


well done!
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4 posted 2003-04-03 05:58 PM


JP...Your average day ....wheew!  Enjoyable acrostic.
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5 posted 2003-04-03 06:12 PM


I enjoyed your take on the average day...

*s
M

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6 posted 2003-04-03 07:33 PM


Wonderful acrostic JP!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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