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majnu
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0 posted 2003-04-03 01:24 AM



two hands and twelve feet
Old Chronos deposed yet present
continously


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anyone care to sing along?

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

© Copyright 2003 Zaheer Abbas Ali - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2003-04-03 09:34 AM


hmmm
I don't know the tune, but the invitation is intriguing.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

OLIAS
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2 posted 2003-04-03 12:26 PM


hmmmm...
This has me thinking, could it be auld lang syne, or am I singing solo ??

Great write,
Regards,
Olias.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-04-03 12:30 PM


This is really a thought-provoking form.
I love these short poems, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

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