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0 posted 2003-04-02 11:12 PM


Eternity

I
could
live
happily
forever
rich
blessed
content
if
even
once
within
each
day
I'd
still
somehow
be
allowed
to
touch
and
just
once
a
single
moment
run
my
fingers
through
the
magic
of
her
hair

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-03 02:22 AM


Ed - this is lovely - a true testament here and nice form !  xxoo
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2 posted 2003-04-03 02:28 AM


:-) I love this...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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3 posted 2003-04-03 09:55 AM


Ed...such a little thing to ask, so big with meaning...I wish you this happiness!  A very sweet poem.  Hugs!
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4 posted 2003-04-03 03:41 PM


This is lovely.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-04-03 06:08 PM


WOW!  I love this...
therefore, I'm keeping it!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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