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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-04-02 01:03 PM



"Our Sara"

Four legs...big paws...a fuzzy ball of fur
With energy that keeps me on my toes
You play...you jump...a never stopping blur
And how you do it, heaven only knows!

Soft eyes...sweet face...you've stolen this poor heart
Especially when you take a break to sleep
You dream...you run...you talk in puppy barks
And somewhere into doggy-land you creep...

But soon...you wake...your noises fill the air
You nudge me with a gentle puppy shove
Outside? Yes, please...the world awaits you there
And I've become a willing slave to you and puppy love!


Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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1 posted 2003-04-02 01:17 PM


Aww Sunnyone, This is such a sweet write. What a beautiful German Sheperd. Looks like he/she has sort of an Elvis type curl to his puppy grin. Enjoyed this. Chris     oops, I just realized HER name...sorry!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-04-02 01:21 PM


Thank you, Nightshade, and you know, you're right about the little curl!!!  We just brought Sara home on Sunday, which was Mother's Day here in jolly ol' England!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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3 posted 2003-04-02 01:46 PM


Hey sister-girl ... this was sweet -- can't wait to meet your beautiful new "baby."  Hope you're up and around again very very soon.  Love, Zoe
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4 posted 2003-04-02 03:40 PM


Sunny she's a sweet one,for sure. I like the note about the elvis smile. Isn't it great that any life event can fall so nicely into a poem?
Sandra

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5 posted 2003-04-02 03:48 PM


Oh Sunny, I love this. I know exactly what you mean about "puppy love". My little doggy's name is Scooter and he's my baby. He is almost 16 months old now. He was born in December a year ago. See, I talk about him likes he's my little kid.  LOL
Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-04-02 11:24 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! (giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, Sara definitely has an Elvis smile, tell me, can she dance the Hound Dog? (giggles) This is soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, and so is Sara, yay, I used to have kittens when I was a boy and wish I could have a new one now, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-04-03 02:15 PM


Sunny - this is so sweet - I loved it!  Just lost my choc lab - means much to me - thank you . . .  xxoo
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8 posted 2003-04-03 02:53 PM


Awwwwwwwww Sunny so sweet.....can see why you fell in puppy love

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2003-04-03 03:34 PM


Very nice!
Eric

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-04-03 04:12 PM


Lovely...almost makes me want a puppy...but no...James
Ariana
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11 posted 2003-04-03 09:50 PM


Sunny
Baby Sara is just beautiful and we didn't have a baby shower to welcome her into your life.   Well written words and I know that she will be your best buddy and a little sister to Bess. Happy Mother's Day!

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