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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-04-02 11:32 AM



I saw a side today
of you I've never seen
Makes me wonder how
much of you is untold

That look in your eyes
was one I couldn't read
A newly found venture
A new chapter "You and Me"

I reach out to hold you
to make you feel secure
Words cannot be spoken
to make you feel at ease

Just being there you say
is enough for your happiness
But your emptiness fills me
and cuts me like a knife

If you are not truly happy
then I will not be either
until I see that smile back
and the light back in your eyes

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-02 11:34 AM


Kristie - this is amazing:

But your emptiness fills me
and cuts me like a knife

Know this well - nice job  xxoo  

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2 posted 2003-04-02 12:23 PM


hope those cut pieces can be rejoined
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3 posted 2003-04-02 02:55 PM


all wounds heal with time...I love to read you.
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4 posted 2003-04-02 03:04 PM


Oh, your words "cut like a knife" through the very heart of me. You surely gave voice to the feelings of many of your readers.

Warm hugs,
EA

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5 posted 2003-04-02 06:41 PM


Thanks you guys....I appreciate.  

Dixie, thanks.  I needed that today and appreciate it more than you know.  XOXO :-)

Ditto to all of ya...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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6 posted 2003-04-05 04:27 PM


Sorry I missed this the first time around, great write
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7 posted 2003-04-06 04:51 AM




smile, friend

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8 posted 2003-04-07 12:32 PM


Just for you dixie....

:-) :-) :-) :-):-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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