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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2003-04-01 10:02 PM

It comes as floor and backdrop tilt oddly.
Not so the others would notice,
but the camera does -
a Batman crime scene lit in greenish glow.

I wonder if only I see it,
this altering air pitch,
a sense of evil on the way.
Tight throats and angled glances
tell me they see it, too.

I concede to an atmospheric sensitivity –
full knowing anxiety creates visions
that don’t exist
or maybe do,
but aren’t meant to be discussed
with dead coworkers.

© 2003 Core

[This message has been edited by Corinne (04-01-2003 10:09 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-04-01 10:31 PM

Powerful piece Cor, muscles tightened reading this

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-04-01 10:32 PM

BRAVO! incredible imagery. I'm saving this one...loved the intensity.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2003-04-02 10:34 AM

A view from other sides.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-04-02 10:38 AM

Oh, yes..."the greenish glow"...haunts both my waking and sleeping hours.

Warm hugs,
Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-04-02 10:53 AM

Very intense write Cor.
Well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2003-04-02 11:26 AM

Thanks everyone!

Cor

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-04-02 11:56 AM

Corinne - amazing job here - know this:

Tight throats and angled glances
tell me they see it, too.

xxoo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-04-02 11:09 PM

(big hugggsssssss) What's the use of sharing the information to co-workers or even Clark Kent anyway, all it becomes is one big debate and the comedy of it all is just the absurdity! (sad sigh) This is so well-written, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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