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pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 72
California coast

0 posted 2003-04-01 01:02 PM



It is good for humans
To want
To need
Love
And even better for us
To try it
Even if trying tells us
We're only mortal
It's right
Nothing matters
When the chest is
Hollow
There's no color
When our eyes are closed
There is no other time
But now
No other place
But here
Stay in the moment
Love isn't sensible
It's not yours
It's not mine
It's ours.

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

© Copyright 2003 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-04-01 01:10 PM


The sharing of love is food for the soul! Lovely thoughts expressed in this poem.

Peace, Love & Light,
EA

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 368

2 posted 2003-04-02 07:29 PM


Stay in the moment
Love isn't sensible
It's not yours
It's not mine
It's ours.

Makes sense to me Sarah *s

~A~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-04-02 07:53 PM


yes, Sarah, love is indeed a sharing
a good write

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-04-02 09:48 PM


Sarah, sounds like you know what
love is. Very good.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2003-04-02 10:11 PM


Enjoyed this very much. So well said, and so well done. ThisDiamond
carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
6 posted 2003-04-15 10:05 PM


Very nice:thumbsup

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-04-16 04:41 AM


Lovely...James
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