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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-04-01 12:06 PM


Replace the sand of
your hourglass with sugar and
enjoy the sweet life

I didn't want to post this some one made me do it...  

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (04-01-2003 12:07 AM).]

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-01 12:15 PM


Raph - this is beautiful - whoever made you post this must see how truly sweet you . . . I'm saving this one . . . xxoo
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2 posted 2003-04-01 12:16 PM


Well I'm glad they did -- it's funny as hell, especially coming from you!

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Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-04-01 12:30 PM


No Sue she's just insane

Thanks Rat..yeah it is kinda funny coming from me lol i don't know where the heck it came from just poppoed in there so i showed it to someone

Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-04-01 12:38 PM


Definetly funny coming from you.
Jason

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-04-01 01:00 AM


itsa keeper, fer sure
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-04-01 02:52 AM


Raph - I am sure the woman you speak of up there  is a member of Mensa - not insane - insanity borders on genius hehe . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-01-2003 02:54 AM).]

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
7 posted 2003-04-01 09:24 AM


Raphael, Your mail is full read it my friend, so I can send.
Jason

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-04-01 10:05 AM


I am glad someone made you post it..it's a
less than twenty beauty

*s
M

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-04-01 10:28 AM


Stupendo! A perfect senryu. Your mind and heart knows how to steer you in the right direction ....
Bravo!
Margherita

Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-04-01 11:50 AM


Thanks Jay lol

Thanks Dixie

No no Sue actually she's a member of MUNSA,
Mentally Unstable Society of Nude Athletes she won the gold medal for 100m hurdles for people who think they're chickens.

jason try again sorry friend pulling a prank filled my box

thanks nakdthoughts appreciate it

Grazie margherita, i usually veer to the right and end up in a ditch though

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-04-02 03:01 AM


Tu pazzo nocciola Ho nessuno idea se questo è tradurre giusto solo di mattina contento tu manifesto lo perch‚ è cosØ dolce giusto simile tu

xxoo

lmao - put this through a translator ahahahaha - OMG too funny - still laughing - similar to what I meant - close enough . . .


OMG ok - here:

Usted de nuez tuerca YO haber no noción si esto es traduciendo derecho pero Estoy contento usted cartel esto ya que es golosina lo mismo que usted

ROFLMAO

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-02-2003 03:17 AM).]

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12 posted 2003-04-02 05:03 PM


Dripping time in sugar...
Hmm, I'll have to think about this one.
did I just detect a grin over your chin?

Enchantress
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13 posted 2003-04-02 05:28 PM


I really like this one...honestly...it's great!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

noah j
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14 posted 2003-04-02 05:32 PM


very nice. i like those quick two to three line things--sometimes they are as powerful as the fifty liners. thanks for sharing.

what about mrs. dash--it think i would rather replace the sand with mrs. dash. i love that stuff.  

noah

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

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15 posted 2003-04-02 05:43 PM


Thankful hugs to the one who made you post it!

Mini ~ yet mighty!

Love & Light,
Linda

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16 posted 2003-04-02 06:16 PM


Please thank whoever asked you to post ... and buy her an entire bouquet for her efforts. I usually don't enjoy the super short poems, yet this one caught me, and stuck with me.
Great job

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

vandana
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17 posted 2003-04-02 07:11 PM


enjoyed
Aenimal
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18 posted 2003-04-02 09:18 PM


Sue wrote " You Crazy nut, I have no idea if this is the right translation,only this morning you manifested the -?- and things right things with a smile sweet????"...um..yes thank you

Yes Kacy I get one from time to time lol

Thanks enchanted one glad you all think so

Thanks noah never tried it

Linda I'll let her know those hugs are a comin

Hey Ringo her efforts? i wrote the poem let her buy me something lol

thanks vandana thanks for reading


littlewing
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19 posted 2003-04-03 02:29 AM


ummm excuse me - I think you need to listen to RINGO up there MR SWEET . . . .
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Aenimal
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21 posted 2003-04-03 09:31 PM


Sorry Sue can't ear ear stuffed

Hey Bri! what's up! gotta hook up in chat soon take care in the meantime

littlewing
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22 posted 2003-04-04 02:37 AM


grrrrrr . . . .  .
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23 posted 2003-04-04 04:27 AM


Glad they did, Raph

Maree.

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24 posted 2003-04-04 08:20 PM


Actually, Sue.. I was wrong... why should he buy her a gift for him doing the work??? I happened to post that in one of my VERY infrequent "touching my feminine side" moments.   lol
Thank you for straightening me out, Raph.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Aenimal
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25 posted 2003-04-04 09:09 PM


Thanks Maree haven't seen you in awhile glad too tho

It's ok Ringo I'm here to help lol

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26 posted 2003-04-04 09:16 PM


You know, ralph, I absolutely love short poems. I often get tired of reading ten-page poems (no matter how good the are. I still can't through 'The Raven' without falling asleep.) It was awesome, I am sincere. Never be afraid to post, and never be normal!

Never be normal!

littlewing
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27 posted 2003-04-04 10:55 PM


Now the both of you are in trouble . . .
Aenimal
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28 posted 2003-04-04 10:57 PM


Thanks Liz, Normal whats that? oh Liz? Please call me Raf or Raph..god i hate when people think its Ralph..Ralph is the english version of Rolph..sigh I'll go back to my corner now

Sue shhhhhhhhh there there

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29 posted 2003-04-07 06:07 AM


after darkness comes the light  
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