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Building Heaven - a duet by Aenimal & Littlewing

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


25 posted 04-02-2003 04:34 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Sorry K I'd like to duet with you but I have a busy card, tea with the queen, modelling for Calvin Klein, dating supermodels and restoring my vintage Ferrari, please make an appointment with my secratary she'll hammer out something with you..Ta ta

lol
vandana
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26 posted 04-02-2003 07:24 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoyed
dreambuilder
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caddyshack


27 posted 04-04-2003 01:10 AM       View Profile for dreambuilder   Email dreambuilder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dreambuilder

I refuse the
march
I will not
stand in shame
under lamp
interrogated
before a creator
who remains
unseen

I loved this part
as its man judging us
not God
keep up the candid expression
excellent write & from two authors
littlewing
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28 posted 04-04-2003 05:45 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

vandana - thank you so much  . . .

dream - yes - a bit of both I guess - but you got it right - nice insight . . .

xxoo
Ceinwyn
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29 posted 04-05-2003 01:47 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

Now that's what I'm talking about..beautiful beyond words! amazing stuff..mmm..I'm green with envy see --> lol

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Ivy Rose
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30 posted 04-05-2003 02:22 PM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ivy Rose

I agree with the others. This poem is very well-written in clarity and truth. I may not agree with your version of Heaven; but your writing skills almost made me a believer.

***Ivy Rose
littlewing
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31 posted 04-05-2003 02:57 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Kris - thank you so much!  Amazing writer you are yourself . . . put that green face away silly lol

Ivy - thank you - . . .  well nobody really agrees us with us sooo  . . .  kidding - seriously - dont have to agree - many perspectives are gleamed from writing - thank you

xxoo  

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Dark Angel
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32 posted 03-27-2005 07:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Darn, i can't beleive i missed this, sheesh...

Great work both of you, you should duet again

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

 
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