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Silver_Tryst
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0 posted 2003-03-31 05:39 PM


This poem is per say about imposable loves, like a fish and a bird. But if you truly have faith and believe in each other, anything is possible.

Standing Together….

Lovers forget you love,
And listen to the love of these,
She is a window flower,
And he a winter breeze,

Him sweeping through the forest,
Singing of his love,
As he wrote in the sky,
Dear my dearest dove,

I want to show them all,
We are meant to be together,
Us against the world,
You and me forever,

As she read this letter,
And looked unto the sky,
"Yes its you I love"
Now she to can fly,

That’s the gift of love
And this is what it brings
All you have to do,
Is help each other spread your wings,

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-01 12:42 PM


Shayne - I loved this!

All you have to do,
Is help each other spread your wings,

Exactly - nice job  xxoo

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-04-01 12:51 PM


Nice!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-01 12:54 PM


Lyrical! Delightful! A pleasure to read!

Peace, Love & Light,
Earth Angel

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-04-01 04:47 PM


Enjoyed...James
Magistic Silver Mage
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5 posted 2003-05-16 10:22 AM


Exelent poem. I wish that I copuld have the same feelings that you have. THANX!!!  
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-26 03:25 AM


very nice write
Rdz9
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7 posted 2003-05-29 12:58 PM


Lovers Breeze was good... This is Very good. Nice write Shayne.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

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