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Etain
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 92
The moon...

0 posted 2003-03-31 03:57 PM



Upon this burst my words efface
toward volatile fields become steam
ecstatic hands that grasp my whole
my eyes faintly slide
like abstruse roots
to vanish quietly
beneath your longing sigh.
Miraculous love who found my wings
your eagerly caring bound me to you...

No boundaries in our fanciful worlds
together arise our wishful roots.

I bow to you,
Etain.

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-03-31 05:31 PM


A passionate compote. ThisDiamond
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-04-02 04:03 PM


Touchingly beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2003-04-03 12:42 PM


I haven't noticed you until now, but of course I don't get to read here as often as I used to. Welcome to Passions. I think your poetry will be at home here.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460
PA, US
4 posted 2003-04-03 01:15 AM


ecstatic hands that grasp my whole
my eyes faintly slide
like abstruse roots
to vanish quietly
beneath your longing sigh.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

very passionate ;-)

good job!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Etain
Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92
The moon...
5 posted 2003-04-12 05:14 PM


Thank you to each of you,
not having so much time to post
to each of your poems, know
I enjoy reading many of them.
A warm hug, poets...
Etain.

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