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phunkimunkee
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0 posted 2003-03-31 02:19 PM


Oasis

A mind bath is to cry
Too much will drown
Refreshed is the desert
That had to little

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1 posted 2003-03-31 03:53 PM


Cool I like it

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Etain
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2 posted 2003-03-31 03:58 PM


Love it.
Greetings, I like your oasis.
Etain.

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