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edh
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0 posted 2003-03-31 01:36 PM


How perfect and brave you are Oh love.
My love has nothing to fear.

Through death of a thousand kingdoms.
Their castles disappear.

How sweet the sound of words you say.
My ears delight me so.

The cadence of all drummers.
A thousand bands shall never know.

How many loves have I of you.
All storybooks can't tell.

How many dreams have I of you.
A bottomless wishing well.

How much the wind has softened time.
Since I discovered you.

A rainbow's end on mountains high.
A voice with sounds anew.

How beautiful your garden.
The trees and flowers abloom.

I will rest here forever in
tapestries of your loom and
I will always speak of your love
my dearest.....

Bridegroom.

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edh
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1 posted 2003-03-31 01:39 PM


So I reposted it at your request Sunnyone and Brad.  Hopefully you can vote on it now if you wish.  Thanks for your kindness.
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2 posted 2003-04-01 10:45 AM


How much the wind has softened time.
Since I discovered you.

A rainbow's end on mountains high.
A voice with sounds anew.

I like this very much. *S* Looking at life with the right person does enhance our senses, doesn't it? *G*

Ron
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3 posted 2003-04-01 11:21 AM


This poem is already posted in Open. Replies should be directed to that copy.
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