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Fragile
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Fragile Flimsy words that film hazel eyes changing them from blue to green envy, aroused by desire for, mindful of the suppression drowning in the depression of walking on the margin of lies hiding from the inner strength that pushes the tears to overfill wondering "why me" how much longer and how much more the impact of driving me fetal. Light blinds these eyes, invitation denied. Darkness, once feared, now protecting the child within, whose heart wants out of body attacking from the inside, so painful each beat. Mirrors are draped, reflection unseen, vibrations of living, edging me closer to the fallout of emotions, a wailing, just wanting an end to it all and the strength, the strength needed to go on without cliche's filling the empty with "time heals", "take one day at a time", "learn from your mistakes", "no one said life is fair" etc. etc. etc. The truth is "there is nothing to fear but fear itself..." as I try to wade through its layers. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-31-2003 01:03 PM).] |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
That was a great poem! I really like your writing style! I look forward to reading more from you. I also like the ending of your poem! =] Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i know about those hazel eyes that change from blue to green... M, this is beautiful pain here. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes fragile, but your words express it powerfully. A state of mind that haunts us at times... only at times hopefully! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you SF Just having an "off" day today, Dixie. Thank you M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes,Margherita...you snuck in there. It is one of those states of mind when I wish I was in another state...*s Thank you M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And yet you open to this state with courage and the faith of the next moment. This is beautiful. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
may be beautiful to you...but it's like a cry for help when there is nothing anyone can do...to stop the turmoil that swirls inside my mind. Thanks ~sighing~ M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cliches are so cliche......when theres nothing else to say,just gotta find your own way, another cliche, oh well, sorry cant think of something novel right now, but this poem is right on target |
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