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Nightmares |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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Did you ever wonder What I really want Out of this life I live Or do you assume it's you You think you know who I am As if you can read my mind Like you know my deepest secrets Can fulfill my innermost desires You don't know me at all, fool I don't want you here now or ever My dreams are without you around Wake up to your worst nightmare Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 remind me not to take you for granted! |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
 That was a great poem! I liked how you ended the poem too. *reads poem over and over*Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL Chic you could never!!! I like the ending too....muuahhahahhaaaa LOL Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - hehehehe: You don't know me at all, fool I don't want you here now or ever My dreams are without you around Wake up to your worst nightmare nice job xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling. This would make a lovely card for that "special" someone in my life!  Thanks for the grin, and trust me, today it's an evil one!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow! That was quite an in-your-face write! I have no concerns over your lacking a sense of personal power! "Write" on! Peace, Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I like this LOL The ending is perfect.. that'll show him... or her.. or whoever lol. Good write  Tara "in my field of paper flowers and candy clouds of lullaby i lie inside myself for hours and watch my purple sky fly over me" - Imaginary by Evanes [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (04-01-2003 02:34 PM).] |
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