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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-03-31 12:27 PM


mourning concerto


Trumpets dance of dreams
Horns bemoan my existence
A pianoforte busies itself

Where are the harps?


  



  
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1 posted 2003-03-31 12:29 PM


...listen carefully.

well done poet sir.

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-03-31 02:58 PM


you aren't dead yet dear...this is still life...love ya...helen
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3 posted 2003-03-31 03:02 PM


where are the harps?

Be careful lovie, they just might show you.

I know, I KNOW, it's poetry, but it does sadden me to read this from you.

gimme a hug? (as if you had a choice)


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4 posted 2003-03-31 03:06 PM


Very clever ~ and yet somewhat melancholy. Would you care to hear me play my angel's harp for you, Dear One?
I would hope that the gentle music will fill your heart with song once again.....

Warm, springtime hugs,
EA

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5 posted 2003-03-31 04:04 PM


Thank you all for the kind replies.
This started out as "morning concerto" as I drove to work this morning and listened to something other than commentary about Iraq.  But you know how it goes, the d*** thing morphs into something else, often something telling . . . oh well
Nancy - are you hearing harps ?
Helen - come closer, see if I'm still breathin' . . .
Karen - [[how 'bout a couple]], thanks
EA - do you really play?  Would love to hear it!

Kraw'

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6 posted 2003-03-31 09:50 PM






(sigh) Here it is! (big hugggsssssss) We all send angel hugs your way and hope all is alright, sweet friend, know we are all here for you to make musical hugs of compassion to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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