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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
Footsteps: trampling across the room; echoing hollowly from bare walls Measured, deliberate steps pacing away, and away An empty room: an empty room that sits alone; brooding replaying memories of a day not long ago when now dark corners were filled with mementos, memories of unfolding years Preceding, and preceding. Fading footsteps: Distant footsteps; barely recognizable echoes fading into silence, leaving only traces on the floor Dusty imprints left behind, bestirred by gusts under the door: Infant twisters that obliterate the remains of footsteps... Now only memories prevail, Locked away in silence. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well written! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
No need a title, the words flow in gentle grace. Love, Etain. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
A very visual write. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Morefiah, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I know this feeling but know some memories will be more than just footprints but grace in full form will mark the most enlightening moments of all! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Morefiah, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Morefiah...this is beautiful. To tell you the symbolism it recalled would be to take a full page here and now and tell you all that you've brought back to me.... but I won't take this away from you...all I can do is offer my most humble thank you...for this wonderful reminisce...I am enjoying your poetry, more and more.... |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
I wrote that poem some time ago. I am still agonizing over a suitable title but hopefully it will come. Thank you all for your appreciation and encouragement. |
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