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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-03-31 09:09 AM


TWENTY OR LESS...#120

Copyright 2003 by:MARK V SHELDON


Death distorts


time

emotions


Love


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-31 09:12 AM


Yes it does....
well done Mark.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2003-03-31 09:21 AM


...well done...

Love

creates life, celebrates

pulls and twists lovers

outlives death

if true
---------

regards
sudhir

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3 posted 2003-03-31 09:27 AM


MARK,
It does all of that and more.

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4 posted 2003-03-31 11:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Mark, this is well-said, death should never be part of love as when such grief comes into place, one feels hopeless what to do to cure the poison away and befuddlement comes to play! (sad sigh) This is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-03-31 11:59 PM


enjoyed this, and Sudhir's reply
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-04-01 04:55 AM


yeah
MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2003-04-01 03:33 PM


Thank you, Nancy.

Sudhir...  that's a wonderful poem in the style and with all the wisdom.  Thank you.

Sy...  and so much more...

Noah...  there's no escaping it...as far as I know...

Thank you, Kacy.

passing shadows:  indeed.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
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