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Body Surfing (senryu) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Seduce the ocean, take these waves into your arms; hold them like lovers. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Been body surfing for a long time...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - this is awesome! Saw a lot of it in Kauai - never tried - but this is just lovely - good job xxoo |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
hot... :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome Ed, alluring and quite frankly its much better than crowdsurfing I'm still recovering from those injuries |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
EXCELLENT, Ed. You are so good at all these different forms of writing... and a great teacher by example, by the way. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hahaha so that's what it's all about  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...I tried body surfing a few times, it was great until I landed on my belly in the sand and found out the ocean is a mighty thing to embrace. It sounds lovely in your poem, but give me a boogy board. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very nicely done... regards, sudhir |
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