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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-03-30 11:46 PM






lightening bolt strikes twice
electrical persuasion
sparking starry night
our lips melding together
fireworks explode inside



Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (03-30-2003 11:50 PM).]

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-03-31 12:42 PM


closest i've come to this lately is a kiss on the cheek by relatives..not quite electric, although the thought of my relatives usually results in a need for shock therapy..coincedence? no lol..sorry i'm out there again but this wonderful words here thanks for posting
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-03-31 12:45 PM


Cheryl, I had a good reply...
then I read Raph's shocking reply.

Beautifully electric, a highly charged photo and great poem, intense energy.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-31 04:53 AM


Sounds like an electrifying kiss...James
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-31 06:25 AM


Cheryl - this is awesome - God I love thunderstorms too - nice job   xxoo

lmao at Raph up there - shock therapy . . . yeah - I know  

regards2you
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5 posted 2003-03-31 08:28 AM




CHeryl,

Great images!!! Both pic and poem...


Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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6 posted 2003-03-31 09:48 AM


whoweee...hot! :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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