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Pascal
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0 posted 2003-03-30 06:32 PM


Words which cut
deep to my soul
bleed the energy
from my being.

Pain that is real
inflicted by letters
composed in malice
to bring grief and sadness.

Tears that are shed
for memories of happiness
days of fulfillment
now gone forever.

I long for relief
and a touch of coolness
to put out the embers
that burn deep inside.

Cruel intentions
harden my resolve
to one day find
a compassionate soul
to begin
the healing.

© Copyright 2003 Pat Petta - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2003-03-31 08:40 AM


And you shall... These are very heartfelt words, Pascal...
Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-31 11:56 AM


The pain is felt, but justified hope too.
Beautiful.
Margherita

Pascal
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3 posted 2003-03-31 12:16 PM


Thank you to you both for your kind words. Words sometimes can cut very deep but hope will always be there to heal.

Pascal

Pascal
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4 posted 2003-03-31 12:18 PM


Tnank you Nan and Margherita for your kind words. Hope goes a long way in the healing process.

Pascal

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-03-31 01:12 PM


Pat, I know about those words...sadly.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-03-31 01:23 PM


Well done Pascal.
Much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

texasrose
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7 posted 2003-03-31 02:20 PM


Very heartfelt writing with a subject known to many of us.  
NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-03-31 03:04 PM


How I understand that pain. Nice write but I'm sorry for the sadness and hope you can find some healing soon.

Hugs for peace. Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-03-31 03:11 PM


I send you a rainbow of Lights ~ may the healing begin! I felt your loneliness, but your life will be filled with joy once again.
The down times make the future good ones even that more special...
Use this time for learning more about yourself and for personal growth. You will be surprised at the good things that may be in store for you!

A very moving piece of writing.

Loving hugs,
Earth Angel

Pascal
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10 posted 2003-03-31 05:28 PM


Thank you so much all for yor kind words and support. Yes we all have our moments in life where the world seems to come to an end but with hope and especially support of those that care for us we will find the strength to heal.

Pascal

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