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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2003-03-30 04:24 PM


Wow, 10,000 posts and it just seems like yesterday. When I think back over the changes that have taken place in my life over the past several years I find it amazing and perhaps a bit of a miracle that I am where I am today. I may never really fly my friends, but I do know how it feels to soar. Thank you all for giving me my wings.    

She Dreamed Of Flight (An Acrostic Sestina)

She lived trapped in a gilded cage
Open doors only a dream
Mystical the clouds for her
Eyes forever on the skies
Transfixed with images of flight
Inspired by her damaged wings

Molted feathers from her wings
Encased the bottom of her cage
She wondered if she’d ever fly
Ever realize her dreams
Venture high up in the skies
Enchanting clouds surrounding her

Night after night, dreams came to her
As she longed to spread her wings
Soft, misty visions of blue skies
Intrigued her there within her cage
Nights haunted by these longing dreams
Gave rise to days with hopes of flight

Lost in images of flight
Each day became a quest for her
Forever reaching for her dreams
Envisioned flight on flawless wings
Avenging life within her cage
Transcending bars to reach the skies

Harbinger to freedom’s skies
Enraptured in her quest for flight
Resigned no more inside her cage
Songs of reproach emit from her
Enticing her to spread her wings
No longer lost within her dreams

Outward now, beyond her dreams
Unleashed she rises in calm skies
Gracefully on outstretched wings
High in the cloudy air she flies
Taken once, freedom’s now hers
Outside the bounds of her own cage

Far far away from her gilded cage
Life had once been cruel to her
Yet through her dreams, she learned to fly
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...by the way, for anyone who doesn't wish to work it out, the acrostic is:
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Sometimes even a single feather's enough to fly

God Bless    


~ Ruth

If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it.
  
  



[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (03-30-2003 04:28 PM).]

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Robert Frazier
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1 posted 2003-03-30 04:40 PM


well done!  not usually attracted to acrostics, but liked the message here...it screams "freedom"!

Rf

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2 posted 2003-03-30 05:11 PM



Way to go Ruth!
10,000 wonderful poems and replies!
Here's to many many thousands more!
A beautiful acrostic sestina to mark this milestone!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

scorpio
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3 posted 2003-03-30 05:14 PM


Very well done, Ruth...I enjoyed your  10000th post..

believe in what your heart feels...

Nan
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4 posted 2003-03-30 05:33 PM


You know - There are but a few who've seen from whence you soar... I smile a great big smile when I look back... and I'm blissfully happy that all you needed was that one very special feather... and that you found it there afloat before you... Soar on, my friend - You deserve the flight... Here's to 10,000 more...
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5 posted 2003-03-30 05:34 PM


Congrats on # 10,000...
Acrostics are very ahrd (for me anyhow) to make sound like anything other than gibberish.. this was very well done.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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6 posted 2003-03-30 07:22 PM






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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-03-30 07:37 PM


Just beautiful Ruth. Congratulations on ten thousand wonderful posts!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-03-30 08:06 PM


I, too, have seen you soar, sweet lady and I have been, and always will be, behind you all the way. Congrats, Ruthie, on TEN GRAND...and for being the survivor you are
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9 posted 2003-03-30 09:05 PM



In ten thousand ways
you've touched more hearts
than you know...

Congratulations, my friend...

regards2you
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10 posted 2003-03-30 10:32 PM




Ruth,

This is wonderful. Enjoyed your talent. And, congratutations.


Hugs, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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11 posted 2003-03-30 10:33 PM


means more to me than you could know, Ruth.



Congrats, lovely, to all of us, for the blessings of your grace.

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12 posted 2003-03-30 11:28 PM




(big huggggsssssss) Oh Ruth, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I have never heard of a sestina acrostic but this seems like such a wonderful form, yay! (kiss on cheek) Yay, CONGRATULATIONS ON 10,000, sweet friend, I can't wait to read thousands more from you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ruth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

kayjay
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13 posted 2003-03-30 11:41 PM


This story of launching a new life.  All those 10,000 writes are paying dividends to us for their skill and beauty.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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14 posted 2003-03-30 11:56 PM


Beautiful, just beautiful, and so true.....although when it comes to feathers, to are better.

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hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 2003-04-01 08:53 AM


Thank you all
Nan, Balladeer and Sunshine, you all knew me when and helped see me to now, thank you dear friends
Ed...so true

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