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Open Poetry #25
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Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
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0 posted 2003-03-29 06:38 PM



Angel Wings


Deep in the mud, the ocean sends her best.
Riding gently upon the crest.

A pair of wings in the mire will come to rest.

Search low, instead of high. Watch their wings unfurl, as the living creature inside of them slowly dies.

Beautiful, as a papyrus scroll.  Ancient, as the greenest Knoll.

Such grandeur found only in the mire, as scholars slowly unearth this sunken treasure.

Yet, rarest by far, it still has the courage and the strength to endure.


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Jason Lyle
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1 posted 2003-03-29 07:52 PM


Beautiful words Gina, but you forgot to click so I could vote!
Jason

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2 posted 2003-03-29 10:29 PM


WLould like to vote.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-03-30 08:01 AM


Gina, let us know when you submit this by clicking on the box, and I'll come back to vote!
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