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Bridegroom |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
How perfect and brave you are Oh love. My love has nothing to fear. Through death of a thousand kingdoms. Their castles disappear. How sweet the sound of words you say. My ears delight me so. The cadence of all drummers. A thousand bands shall never know. How many loves have I of you. All storybooks can't tell. How many dreams have I of you. A bottomless wishing well. How much the wind has softened time, since I discovered you. A rainbows end on mountain's high. A voice with sounds anew. How beautiful your garden. The trees and flowers abloom. I will rest here forever. In tapestries of your loom. And I will always speak of your love, my dearest..... Bridegroom. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A melifluous feeling that has a classic literature aura to it... Well done. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I will rest here forever. In tapestries of your loom. **** how lovely! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
came back to check this one for the book |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
very nice got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Lots of nice couplets, like this one "How many dreams have I of you. A bottomless wishing well." Kraw' |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (big hugggsssssss) I hope you have read this to your love, sweet friend, this is bound to bring your love a smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, I like the classical feel of this. It gets my vote. sG |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is almost like a love story...  So sweet, edh... Very much enjoyed._,,,^.^,,,_ |
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