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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-03-30 11:02 AM


“SHADOWS WHISPER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Darkness overcomes the night with quiet,
my eyes close, your skin becomes warmer…
Dreams become real of your gentle touch,
your response is of a loving abductor…

Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard,
a warm breeze begins to flow upon my face…
Your breath of passionate desires to know,
lips slowly part, eyes sparkle with your grace…

Love near the patio, as soft moonlight beckons,
whispers of trees swaying, lips taste each other…
Mesmerized with you, entering into your world,
tender is the night inside shadows whisper...
~~~~

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1 posted 2003-03-30 11:24 AM


You say it well, my friend. Men's feelings are so often pushed behind other things....good to see them out in the open with a talented pen to lead them.

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-03-30 11:28 AM


Bill,
"tender is the night" enjoyed.

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3 posted 2003-03-30 12:03 PM


You words are always filled with romance and tenderness Bill Full of sighs and smiles here!

Tara

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i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
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MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2003-03-30 12:06 PM


Bill:  what a fresh and welcome feeling in today's day and age and state of "affairs"...

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5 posted 2003-03-30 12:48 PM


the patio...ah...what a memory!
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6 posted 2003-03-30 01:42 PM


Bill this is just lovely - as always

Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard,
a warm breeze begins to flow upon my face…

brings me there it does . . . xxoo

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7 posted 2003-03-30 02:24 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I long to kiss my dream love like that as I can only imagine how beautiful a feeling it is to share the night with a loved one! (big hugggsssssss) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
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8 posted 2003-03-30 05:16 PM


Bill...What can I say that hasn't been said about your wonderful poetry. Except...your poetry has the power to mesmorize and enchant those who grasp just a hint of the romance in your beautiful poem. WONDERFUL POEM!!!!

***Ivy Rose

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (03-30-2003 05:17 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-03-30 05:20 PM


Great poem! I liked the title of it. Very creative and beautiful.
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10 posted 2003-03-30 05:23 PM


BC, I never tire of reading your wonderfully romantic pieces. This line Listen to the stillness, only deep sighs heard is so soothing and loving.

Huggles for peace.  Marti

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Margherita
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11 posted 2003-03-30 05:50 PM


Ah this is so lovely and stirring. You create beautiful atmospheres!
Love, Margherita

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12 posted 2003-03-30 05:53 PM


This was very descriptive, and a most excellent post. Great job.

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