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Greeneyes
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   {From the Notebook}
~*~*~*~
Here in dark-- mid winter'
      the ocean meets  horizons
another     instance of embrace
  stars falling    single color  {water and sky}

I need to touch that point of reflection
                    drenched sweet

how sometimes   the taste of you
     reminds my lips      of flavors   {love}

I walk often on the       edge of myself

between earth and heaven        in
  
     sil
ent path --

clouds behind me dancing

s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e
      shadows slide from the sky

   remembering as


he whispered
   you are my  salvation


in quiet       voice
~~~~~~~~~


I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night




[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-30-2003 11:34 PM).]

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Greeneyes -

"how sometimes   the taste of you
     reminds my lips      of flavors"  {love}


Once before   I felt softness of
     lips such as these...

BC

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Yes, very much a quiet voice poem....
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Greeneyes
Well done, enjoyed the read.
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So quietly, in a whispered breath, hearing the word LOVE within these shadows.
beautifully done, Lauren
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....shhhh...a little secret....I take writing lessons from you.......you're a marvel....shhhhh...

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Here in dark-- mid winter'
      the ocean meets  horizons
another     instance of embrace
  stars falling single color  {water and sky}

I need to touch that point of reflection
                    drenched sweet

how sometimes   the taste of you
     reminds my lips      of flavors   {love}

I walk often on the       edge of myself

between earth and heaven
  
     silent path

clouds behind me dancing

s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e
      shadows slide from the sky

=====================================


When I read you...I feel a peace that I rarely ever touch.....its like I breathe from a lighter place ...
its one of those rare moments of calm exhale...serenity of sigh.
Thank you for that me sweet butterfly sister.

  

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

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"how sometimes   the taste of you
     reminds my lips      of flavors   {love}

I walk often on the       edge of myself

between earth and heaven
  
     silent path

clouds behind me dancing

s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e
      shadows slide from the sky"




How can you be this good every time I read you?????  You are just breath taking dear poet  


Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-30-2003 12:01 PM).]

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I walk often on the       edge of myself

between earth and heaven        in
  
     silent path --

clouds behind me dancing

s t r e t c h i n g theneverending l i n e
      shadows slide from the sky

   remembering as


he whispered
   light was salvation


in quiet       voice
~~~~~~~~~

******************

You always lend us a path of serene travel in your words and this one is no exception.  

Beautiful as the heart of the poet that penned it.
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GreenEyes~
Such delicacy is a lovely talisman of your work~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


Psssssssst ... I see you, MarkB~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous poetry always make me smile as they reflect such light and beauty over the waters! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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