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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-03-30 09:15 AM

Under little White Stars

I see your life in the depth of your eyes
I feel your warmth in the breath of your sighs
You can not hide from what’s real and alive
Let your heart feel what is right

When you encounter the power of love
You cannot battle the forces above
That come to you sweetly on wings of a dove
And little white stars of delight

Deeply I cradle your heart in my own
This kind of comfort you’ve never been shown
Honesty hovers above the unknown
Misgivings will vanish tonight

Let me embrace any fears of the past
Let me undo any shadow that’s cast
The pause of an uncertain footstep at last
Let passion extinguish the fright

You will embrace what you never have felt
Your spirit will kneel where it never has knelt
The fires inside you will tenderly melt
The cage that has hindered your flight

How can you reach what you never have sought
How can you hold what you never have caught
Now is the moment your heart will be taught
Under little white stars of delight

Elizabeth Santos

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-03-30 09:21 AM

How can you reach what you never have sought
How can you hold what you never have caught
Now is the moment your heart will be taught
Under little white stars of delight

so true, and a beautiful poem, Liz
hugs
M

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-03-30 10:08 AM

Elizabeth,
A little bit different in style but certainly worth your while, excellent. Sy

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-03-30 11:06 AM

LovelyLizzyLady~

'How can you hold what you never have caught'

Oh my .... how this one 'talks'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-03-30 11:09 AM

Yes. Oh yes to that.

Thank you for adding this beauty to a Sunday morning in which I truly needed it.

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-03-30 11:26 AM

An excellent rendition, Lady Santos...
a beautiful Sunday morning read...

thank you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-03-30 12:59 PM

beautiful! I can't seem to think of any other words.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-30 02:30 PM

(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) The stars know our desires as He hangs them lovingly, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-03-30 09:05 PM

I said
Cause I can !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-30 09:16 PM

So beautiful, Liz. I'm glad that
Marge bumped it back up!!

Hugs,
Ethel

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-03-30 11:02 PM

Liz...you just keep on writing one beauty after another...this one touches a needed place today..thank you.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2003-03-31 08:59 AM

You will embrace what you never have felt
Your spirit will kneel where it never has knelt
The fires inside you will tenderly melt
The cage that has hindered your flight

How can you reach what you never have sought
How can you hold what you never have caught
Now is the moment your heart will be taught
Under little white stars of delight
====================================

I dont know whats more impressive..
your very clever rhyme scheme and cadence..
or the touching emotions the poem conveys..
and then add the alliterations, assonance, and imagery.
Exquisite write Poetess of Grace..truly!!

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2003-03-31 09:06 AM

Grace and beauty...

Of course Liz...

Regards,
Sudhir

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2003-03-31 09:13 AM

A very warm thank you to all your lovely responses to this poem.
I appreciate them very much
Liz

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2003-04-01 10:38 AM

When you encounter the power of love
You cannot battle the forces above
That come to you sweetly on wings of a dove
And little white stars of delight
----------------
Let me embrace any fears of the past
Let me undo any shadow that’s cast
The pause of an uncertain footstep at last
Let passion extinguish the fright

I love this so much, Elizabeth... how can you gain if you don't give... how can you reap if you don't risk? *S* And the rhyme scheme is wonderful!!!

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