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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-03-30 08:11 AM


Eternities Imperfection

Eternity’s imperfection
Is changes indigestion?
Its insatiable appetite
By the maw of the black holes night

Evolutions magic tide
A version of Jeckle and Hyde
Chemistries subtle euphony
Into forevers never be

Implosion of liberty
Of agony and ecstasy
A moment’s conscious ride
Flowing on eternities tide.

So mark you well the moments spell
This infinitesimal dwell
This dogma of illusion
This paradox confusion

Sing your song and ring your chime
You are, eternity’s time.


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1 posted 2003-03-30 08:51 AM


Good Sunday Morning Seymour! Am I early? Or am I just in time? lol. Your wonderful write to-day reminded me .... especially the first stanza of the song that went "The object of my affection, could change my complexion, from white to rosey red." Remember that tune? It's amazing how a poem can transport our thoughts. Enjoyed. Apple Spice Muffins to-day! Where is my sister with the tea?!!
hugs to you, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-03-30 08:58 AM


Chris,
Yes I do remember that song and I'm sure your sister must be asleep.

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3 posted 2003-03-30 09:07 AM


Asleep??  Moi?  Asleep??
No way!  I was brewing you a fresh pot of Chai tea love!
Much enjoyed this mornings pearls of wisdom.
I recall that song too...
Also remined me of that old saying,
"Well, ring my chimes!"
~Morning hugs and tea~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-03-30 10:04 AM


Nancy,
Good morning dear,

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5 posted 2003-03-30 11:11 AM


Seymour~

'mark you well the moments spell'

And I am caught in yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-30 11:14 AM


Marge,
You are a sweetheart,

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7 posted 2003-03-30 11:37 AM


Chemistries subtle euphony
Into forevers never be

Implosion of liberty
Of agony and ecstasy

A moment’s conscious ride
Flowing on eternities tide.

==================================


Your couplet of wisdom's way cool make me muse smile at your wile as it sends me back to school to learn the poetic golden rule.

Thats my way of saying your rhymes are the raspberry winkies of my day *L*

*ww*

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


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8 posted 2003-03-30 11:49 AM


Seymour - another excellent write from a poet master's pen...

BC

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9 posted 2003-03-30 11:52 AM


Evolutions magic tide
A version of Jeckle and Hyde

Love this  pair of lines...and the rest, of course.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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10 posted 2003-03-30 12:57 PM


big smile
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(sigh) Oh Seymour, yes, eternity is really not a quality, it is in us all along and we represent the hope for eternity and that is what makes it closer to perfect! (big hugggssssss) Love this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-03-30 05:29 PM


JM,
And your my raspberry winkies.
WWRS

Bill ,
Thank you my friend.

Ken,
Thank you so much.

passing shadows
Thanks for the smile.

Noah,
Enjoyed your reply.

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13 posted 2003-03-31 01:32 AM


So mark you well the moments spell
This infinitesimal dwell
This dogma of illusion
This paradox confusion

So much wisdom in your thoughtful thoughts,
they put my mind to rest,  and I thank you for that.

Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-03-31 01:41 AM


great read as always sy

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-03-31 06:27 AM


SY - as always - quite stunning:

This infinitesimal dwell
This dogma of illusion
This paradox confusion

this sounds like me . . .  xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-03-31 07:17 AM


BluesSerenade
A lovely reply, thank you.

Aenimal
Thank you my friend.

littlewing
I hope it sounds like all of us.

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