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Open Poetry #25

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2003-03-29 11:50 PM

sun colored feathers
come and sing at the window
days inn paradise

Dance
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-30 12:26 PM

Good job, but is this the traditional, or a variation?
Traditional is mainly about nature.

Have fun with it!
LoLuv,
~*~DanCe~*~

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2003-03-30 02:44 PM

Not sure what it is.....i just go with flow and whatever hits me. I guess I am a rogue that way!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-03-30 04:55 PM

very nice, traditional or otherwise

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-03-30 06:48 PM

let her sing to you, uncaged and free and she'll come back again

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-03-30 06:53 PM

She can sing all she wants.....I have a good ear for music among other things. And I appreciate your kind comments dear friends!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-03-30 07:09 PM

Very nicely done and much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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