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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-29 11:31 PM



Average Human take a good look around
Tell me what do you see
Corporate business is destroying Nature's property
They have us all us all looking straight ahead
Before you know it Nature will be dead
Then it will be too late to be sorry
Open your eyes

Average Human take a good look around
Tell me what do you see
Do you see the same light that's been blinding me
Ask a question, Does anyone care
In my opinion corporate minds won't share
My opinion is ignorance is all the same
Open your eyes
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This came to mind after reading about some contamination of the watershed in the local area.


Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-30 03:56 AM


Brad - can relate to this well - there were so many steel plants here now just ghosts . . but leaving residue  - very powerful provoking writing . . . xxoo

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2 posted 2003-03-30 03:59 AM


yeah...good write
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3 posted 2003-03-30 12:26 PM


I like this.. as littlewing said, it is thought provoking, and that is always good thing for a poem to have Well done.

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

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4 posted 2003-03-31 04:42 AM


They go by priorities...the main thing they consider is money...James
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5 posted 2003-03-31 07:57 AM


Corporate business is destroying Nature's property
They have us all us all looking straight ahead
Before you know it Nature will be dead
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My dad always said that in the future we will be eating bricks, because there will be no farmland left....

how true...good job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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