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edh
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 111


0 posted 2003-03-29 04:30 PM


I'm talking to you.

Singing.

Now.

Then.

Summer.  Time.

I have talked.

Sang.

To.

You.

Then.

Soon.

So different.

I sang. Talked to trees.

Streets.

Sewers.

Weeds.

In cracks.

I would say they are listening.

To me.

I've thought of specs in eyes.

Eyelids open.

No one pushes.

Forces.  

They  go up and down.

We see.

I fall when I see.
I don't stop falling.

Myself.

I'm an eyelid.

It is summer.  Now.

Then.

Soon.

Please.

Open your eyelids -

As Sewers -

Streets -

Weeds -

Sing - Talk to me.

Please me.

© Copyright 2003 edh - All Rights Reserved
leighsa
Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
1 posted 2003-03-29 08:40 PM


Nice write....
It was cool ...
ashgiel            


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