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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2003-03-29 09:25 PM


To my nation,
of whom I greatly adore.
Here we are, in a nation,
at war.

What will we become,
in this world of disarray.
I wander the streets to come,
and rescue someone else whos gone astray.

But yesterday, my nation.
I cried out to you and My Lord,
But there is only room for one nation.
In my heart before I'm overboard.

To my nation,
bless our troops.
To my nation,
we will not lose.

To my nation, Smile because
Our Lord leave us Left here behind.
To my nation, do not cry.
I am here to bare down.

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-03-29 10:08 PM


Nice expression of your thoughts...James
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-03-29 10:10 PM


Thank You James!
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
3 posted 2003-07-13 04:06 AM


What does this poem mean? It had meaning when I wrote it, but it has been lost. I am clueless now to what triggered this.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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