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0 posted 2003-03-29 07:42 PM




          ~~~~~~~~~~
Charmed by your smile.
Allured by your gaze.
Pacified by your voice.
Transcended by your spirit.
Intoxicated by your scent.
Vanquished by your energy.
Amazed by your grace.
Tickled by your humour.
Entranced by your thoughts.
Distracted by your silhouette.
          ~~~~~~~~~~~
                                 Chris Barker
                                    2003
                                     ~~


© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-29 07:51 PM



THIS could be a Hallmark occasion!  What man or woman wouldn't want to be given just this very gift!  I'm look at brilliance here!  I'm sure you came across this word as a quest for sharing just moments ago, and bingo...here you are, sharing the very essence of captivation in its most human reasoning!

I am so very PROUD of you, Chris!  This is a wonderful acrostic!  Thank you for sharing your thoughts of captivated with us!

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2 posted 2003-03-29 07:55 PM


Chris...if all these are true, then you are indeed captivated.  Enjoyed!
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3 posted 2003-03-29 08:21 PM


Very clever, enjoyed.
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4 posted 2003-03-29 08:32 PM


Karilea - thankyou dear lady, I am blushing at your kind "words." hugs

Martie - yes, I guess I am captivated - no, it's not a guess...I truly am. Thankyou

Whiterose - thankyou dear poetess

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-03-29 08:42 PM


An excellent and expert drawing of words.
ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2003-03-29 08:59 PM


Chris~ Beautiful words in any style. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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7 posted 2003-03-29 09:08 PM


Oh, very nice!

Much better than my one little attempt.... /pip/Forum64/HTML/001531.html

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8 posted 2003-03-29 09:16 PM


ThisDiamond, Paul, & Ratleader, thankyou for your kind comments.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-03-29 09:27 PM


Ah!  Excellent acrostic Chris...
Much enjoyed..I too was captivated!
~Hugs & Love ya, Teed~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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10 posted 2003-03-29 09:29 PM


This is a wonderful acrostic, Chris!
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11 posted 2003-03-29 09:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this truly captivated me as all your gorgeous words do, I too think this would be great on a Hallmark Card, oh, what am I saying, you should start your own card brand with your gorgeous poems! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-03-29 10:01 PM


Nancylee, Sue & Noah, Thankyou all !! hugs!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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