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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Words melt away like chalk in the rain, as your eyes wander, I sit and ponder because your silence is disturbing, fade away into the wall- as a picture, torn in half but all I want is to hear you- speak Poetry does not know age, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Short and simple- but I really liked it. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great work as usual Liz, this one strikes close too. waiting for replies myself |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 missed you you little sweetheart, my computers broke and i'm missing my fave poets so much! you speak well of how disturbing someones silence can be learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
amazing work |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, you speak with so much wisdom. I love your poetry.  Heart Hugs, Ethel  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Liz..this is beautiful.. you are wise beyond your years. And btw..love your sig line!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
actions speak louder than words... great job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello Wind!! Love this write. Like my sister Enchantress said "wise beyond your years." hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Very nicley written - well done! Pascal Believe in yourself and wonderous things will happen |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
your silence is disturbing, fade away into the wall- as a picture, torn in half but all I want is to hear you- speak' This style suits you well. Excellent poem Liz. Love the brevity and the sincerity. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hugs to you |
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