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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-03-29 06:05 PM


Annie It's Nice
To See You

I have the poems
right here in my pocket
straight from my heart
to you.

Can I read you
one or two?
Annie said,
"Later, after
we're through."

She only glanced
at the poems now in her hand
and quickly put them away.
A little later she
had to run.

She always
goes away.
She never has the
time to stay.

It was nice
to see you
Annie.

JamesLee
March29
2003


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Alicethruglass
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1 posted 2003-03-29 06:09 PM


well next time you will have to read them to her before and not after...

~A~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
2 posted 2003-03-29 10:52 PM


James - this one was sad - dont waste your words on those not worthy - xxoo
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-03-29 10:53 PM


She is not worthy of your words James. Move on. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
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4 posted 2003-03-30 12:07 PM


James, this is really sad but a good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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5 posted 2003-03-30 12:18 PM


This is a very poignient (sp?) write. We should all take time for each others words... and a write from the heart is never wasted.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Aya
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since 2003-03-25
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New Zealand
6 posted 2003-03-30 01:53 AM


Great poem, next time i think you will have to think of a way to make her listen :P
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-30 03:54 AM


just like me...hmmmmm...
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8 posted 2003-03-30 05:03 PM


this was sad...

maybe, when Annie needs to read those words the most, she will have them at hand....and they will mean more to her than you could even imagine....

HUGGLES

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-03-05 12:02 PM


I thank each one of you for responding...James
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10 posted 2008-01-29 10:10 PM


touching

ARCTIC WIND

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