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By The River
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By The River |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Pouring pooling beneath the shivering body of the brown field mouse A blood stain left imprinted on smooth slate by the river I ask: "Why so cruel this God of mine?" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Cruel? No not he..striking image coco |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the poor little mouse. It pains me to see anyone suffer--even mine enemies! --Hope I don't have any tho'! God is Loving, never cruel. Pray for the mouse... Warm hugs, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Compassion is a nice thing to possess...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with JamesM *s but I definitely would rather see a mouse outside then in my home *s M |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Said alot with few words.I really like this. Jason |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - o'wwwwwwwwwwcccccccchhhhhhhh! The poor little mouse!!!! BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - thats coo koo to you - and TY - tried feel the mouse there . . . EA - I know God is loving - just wonder why cruel things happen . . . TY James - how sweet - I didnt even see compassion in this TY nakd - HAHAHAHAHAHA yes me too TY Thanks Jason Bill - lol - the mouse was only in my head hehehe Thanks guys xxoo |
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