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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-03-29 10:38 AM



crisscrossing branches,
winters withered on bare trees,
spring willows weeping

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-29-2003 10:40 AM).]

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-03-29 10:50 AM


This is awesome!
Eric

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2003-03-29 11:19 AM


Nature enhances
as life seasons coming breeze
with each leaf reaping

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-03-29 01:18 PM


Beautiful imagery.
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2003-03-29 02:45 PM


I couldn't wait to read this...
quite a cool little jive kid. ThisDiamond

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
5 posted 2003-03-29 03:11 PM


Beautiful!!!


Charisma

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-03-29 03:47 PM


Your 5-7-5 jive, is alive!

Have a great spring!

EA

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-03-29 06:43 PM




tips gathering green
rain tending branches in need
'morrows bloom in wait

it's been raining on an off all day, but I see the wearing of the green through my windows *s
M

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
8 posted 2003-03-29 11:48 PM


I wish i could write like you. Does your talents know no bounds......whether short as in Haiku or long as in some recent writings, your star shines brightly.
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-03-30 04:18 AM



inkedgoddess
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Ohio
10 posted 2003-03-30 08:03 AM




thanks, nice comments,

love haiku.........like when i could get someone to bounce off mine too

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