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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-03-29 07:05 AM


I want to make
love to you
in such a special way,
we create our own fantasies.

In a fragrance,
that is you and me,
going wild on each other.
Yet being so gentle,
that the aroma merges into,
an exquisite bouquet.

That every nerve tingles
from the anticipation
of exotic caresses,
swirling in endless desires.

Longing sighs
of day dream memories
coming true
before our eyes.

In all the things making
lovemaking delicate,
we will create
the friction needed
to hold each other tender.

In affection
our friendship bonds
from a great intensity
of commitment and respect.

I want to
make love to you
in such a special way,
that my smile never ends.

D.Lester Young 3/29/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

© Copyright 2003 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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singapore
1 posted 2003-03-29 10:30 AM


what a great anthem that every guy should learn by heart
and i want to vote for this

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
2 posted 2003-04-11 11:29 PM


This is really good you got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2003-04-12 01:10 AM


D.Lester Young - special this is...

BC

LUV_R_GIRL2379
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since 2003-04-09
Posts 42

4 posted 2003-04-12 01:40 AM


Wow! very nice! this poem has so much passion and feeling it almost takes your breath away! keep up the good work!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-04-12 02:48 AM


romantic! very good write! got my vote!
KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-04-12 09:54 AM


You definitly get my vote on this

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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7 posted 2003-04-12 07:41 PM


What a passionate piece! Now this is what it is all about. Thank you!

-Patricia

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-04-12 07:52 PM




(sigh) This is a precious gem, sweet friend, yay, your wonderful words always make me smile and are flooding with love! (big hugggssssssss) May the smile always shine on your face, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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