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carol
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0 posted 2003-03-28 11:17 PM


God I have several brothers and sister but
I only had one brother and sister I was raised with

God my sister is so sick and it is hard for her to
try to eat she is in so much pain

God you have already taken my brother to be with you
please don't take my sister also

I could not stand life with out her the only way
I know to help her is to pray for her

The doctors really do not know how to help her but god
I know you can help her

I have always tried to take care of my little sister but
I can not take this sickness away from her

God she means so much to me it breaks my heart
to see her going through so much

God will you put your hand over her for me
you see god I am not ready to give her up

God I know you are hearing my pray and I hope you do not
see fit to take her from me now

God she is the only full blood siblig I have left
so will you let me keep her a while longer


Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (03-28-2003 11:32 PM).]

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Saunni
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1 posted 2003-03-28 11:24 PM


Carol, I don't know what to say! This took my heart completely. I feel for you so much as I hate to feel helpless when I see someone hurt, let alone, family. I am sorry for her and for you. Feel free to email anytime if you need to talk. This is so heartfelt, Carol. I wish you all the support you need and your sister, too. Sincerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-29 01:17 AM


Rita, I know how you wrote your heart in this poem, because I know you.

You know when you first read it to me that it made me cry.....well, it still does. The reader can feel your hurt in it.

I really hope and pray that she gets well and also, that God will help you.
Talk to you later,
Heart Hugs,
Ethel


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-29-2003 01:52 AM).]

ambrish
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3 posted 2003-03-29 03:22 AM



  we all pray for her
  and prayer can do miracles
  
  God will hear it.
  
  And your heart is so sweet and innocent
  And don't stop voice of your heart
  Let words flow freely from your heart
  AND you have affected everyone
    

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4 posted 2003-03-29 10:11 AM


carol,
i definitely felt the pain and anguish from this piece...and i appreciate you placing yourself in God's hands for surely He is the best person for such circumstances huh?...i hope you will gain closure and peace, regardless the outcome

hugs

regards2you
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5 posted 2003-03-29 10:21 AM




Carol,

What Kaile said. Also, may God give you strength and perseverance through this difficult, sad time. May He  relieve you both of suffering, in His way, in His own time, His will be done.

Heart hugs and love, to you both and your family, all are in my prayers, may all have healing.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-29 09:52 PM


Rita, I just wanted to come
back to read again.
Gary and I love ya'll.
Hugs from us both,
Ethel

Kellie_Cantrell
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7 posted 2003-03-29 09:58 PM


Wow, I'll be keeping her in my prayers!

God Bless

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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8 posted 2003-03-29 09:59 PM


You are in my thoughts and prayers~
Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-03-29 10:01 PM


A beautiful and touching prayer for your sister...James
Angel
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10 posted 2003-03-29 11:20 PM


She is most certainly in my prayers. (hugs)

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carol
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11 posted 2003-03-30 12:00 PM


sauni,thank you for your prayers I really appreciate them
Rita

Ethel, thank you for your prayers I am glad to have you for a friend
with love Rita

ambrish,I appreciate your prayers and you are right prayer does miracles
Rita

kaile, thank you for your prayers and yes God is the best person for the job
Rita

Pat,I appreciate all of your prayers thank you so much
Rita

kellie,thank so much for keeping us in your prayers
Rita

Nancy,I am so glad to have so many wonderful people to help me pray thanks
Rita

James,thank you for your comments and your prayers
Rita

angel,thank you for my sister in your prayers
Rita

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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12 posted 2003-03-30 03:57 AM


I hope you get the answer you seek
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13 posted 2003-03-30 04:01 AM


I will keep you both in my prayers.
Jason

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14 posted 2003-03-30 09:06 AM


Prayers are on the wing Carol, for both of you. Take heart dear one. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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15 posted 2003-04-02 11:26 PM


Gary and I love you, Rita. Just wanted you to not forget it.
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-04-02 11:36 PM


Lay your hands lovingly upon your sister. She will feel the healing power of your touch. By posting this poem, you have added many prayerful voices singing out for her full recovery--and there is power in numbers.

Sending your sister a rainbow of healing Lights,
EA

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17 posted 2003-04-02 11:42 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, know all our prayers are with your sister and you and may her illness heal away and may she be comforted with love and strength! (wipes tears) You truly are an angel, sweet friend, this is destined to bring tears of love to her eyes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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18 posted 2003-04-03 10:59 PM


passing shadows, thank for your concern and your prayers

Jason, thank you for your prayers we appreciate them

Chris,thank you for your prayers we appreciate all the prayers we can get

Ethel, I don't ever forget that you & Gary loves us we love you also I am glad to have a friend like you

Earth Angel,Thank you so much for your loving words I appreciate having this family at passions to help me pray

Noah,you are so sweet I appreciate all of your prayers and comments every one on this site are so nice

To everyone I am sorry I didn't answer yor reply sooner

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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19 posted 2003-04-06 02:57 PM



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20 posted 2003-04-06 03:01 PM


Many healing thoughts to your sister, and to you for much needed strength.
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21 posted 2003-04-06 03:23 PM


thinking of you and hoping for the best.
M

SPIRIT
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22 posted 2003-04-06 10:57 PM


If love could cure - your sister would indeed be well. Prayers for both of you.
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23 posted 2003-04-09 02:18 AM



Dark Angel
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24 posted 2003-04-09 02:20 AM


you and your sister are both in my prayers.

Maree.

carol
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25 posted 2003-04-11 11:01 PM


midnitesun, thank you for your prayers and thoughts
Rita
nakdthoughts, thank you for everything
Rita
spirit,thank you for your prayers
Rita
Maree,thank you for your prayers
Rita
And to everyone that is helping me pray and voted for me I thank everyone I apperciate it very much

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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