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Open Poetry #25

Laces

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2003-03-28 10:38 PM

Laces


I sit here
in the spring rain
    cold
        dripping

I see laces
there
    untied
in your neglected shoes

You walk away
    barefoot
on the warm sand
and warm my soul

©   032703

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

1 posted 2003-03-28 10:41 PM

Beautiful!!!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-03-28 10:54 PM

*smoooch*

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-29 12:33 PM

Beautiful

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-03-29 01:44 AM

Short, and very very sweet!!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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