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0 posted 2003-03-28 01:39 PM



Tremblings

Most bare and offered tenderly but shred a sleeping tigers numb
Withdrawn to sob so humbly, into deep slumbers arms succumb
In solitary respite calms the sting of disbelief, a core bled burn
Withdrawn the shocks and lashes of what love has left to learn

For time the thorough teacher and time the healing art
Withdrawn to caves of disbelief, secluded days in jigsaw part
Into the cool clean waters well the silent spirit sounds
Withdrawn and kept to stitching well enough a life rebounds

Upon a pipers note by far, sent music to the spirits ears
Withstood and cherished tenderly, as once again the body hears
In trance like states of willow fates the destiny of dreams
Most bare and offered tenderly a leathered feel it seems

Copyright Kkh 3/28/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-28 02:06 PM


"Upon a pipers note by far, sent music to the spirits ears
Withstood and cherished tenderly, as once again the body hears
In trance like states of willow fates the destiny of dreams
Most bare and offered tenderly a leathered feel it seems"

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Most beautiful Kathleen...
Very beautiful rhythm..and dreamlike quality.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-03-28 03:40 PM


Wonderfully done!
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3 posted 2003-03-28 04:24 PM


Very beautiful!
Eric

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