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Krystopher Morris
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Ancient land called Chivalry

0 posted 2003-03-28 11:48 AM


These...

You hide it so well
I don't know
If you'll even tell

These secrets
These lies

I'm scared to ask
if all I see
is just a mask

These pains
These cries

I say I love you
something that you know
Do you love me
is all you have to show

These laughs
These sighs

Day by day
Night by night
I long to see
your gorgeous sight

These sunsets
These blue skies

I would die for you
Would you even
cry for me?

These tears
These fears

All I want is
is love in return;
That's something
for my heart to earn

Poetry is love and love is life.

© Copyright 2003 Krystopher Morris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-03-28 12:31 PM


Beautiful.
Your heart DESERVES love.
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-28 12:40 PM


Krystopher, I hope if this is about you
personally, that the one you are writing
about sees this. It's very touching.

Hugs,
Ethel

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-28 01:36 PM


Very very nice....enjoyed ever so much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-03-28 02:27 PM


~sighs and wipes away a tear~ Oh Krystopher, I know how this feels. This touched me deeply and I have to write it down (printer is shot). I'll be looking for more of your work. This is sadly beautiful

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

MissKlarmic
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Canada,N.S
5 posted 2003-03-29 07:30 PM


such a touching beautiful peice of work.
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-03-29 07:37 PM


The ache of longing this love is almost as wonderful as the attainment...for this is what makes that so amazing. Well done.
ThisDiamond

LngJhnAg
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7 posted 2003-04-04 08:56 PM


A call we've all heard and made.  Nicely done.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-04-04 09:02 PM


Incredibly beautiful...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-04-05 07:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Krystopher, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, life shouldn't be like this and I send hugs of hope that soon you find the truths as lies are nothing but black! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krystopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
10 posted 2003-04-05 07:19 PM


Your words show that your heart has well earned the love you so desire...A wonderful poem...
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2003-04-05 07:41 PM


Krystopher - a heart that yearns will one day find what it is looking for. Best to you...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2003-04-06 08:58 AM


I like the format of this...
short but flowing

M

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
13 posted 2003-04-06 11:50 AM


Love can be so incredibly beautiful when it is reciprocated. If this poem is about your yearning and burning desire for love, may love find you and fulfill all your dreams.

Love & Light,
EA

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14 posted 2003-04-06 12:22 PM


Voting.......

Give it to her...find out. Unless she's a fool who can't respond to verses like these, you'll get the ending you want.

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passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2003-04-11 03:41 AM


I agree with all above!
littlewing
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New York
16 posted 2003-04-12 09:45 PM


Krys:

I would die for you
Would you even
cry for me?

the ultimate question - loved this xxoo

Paul Wilson
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17 posted 2003-04-12 10:39 PM


Krystopher...Tender words. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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