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Laoha
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0 posted 2003-03-28 03:40 AM




THINKING OF YOU

Thinking of you,
Water fountain,
Out of control.

In the bitter winter,
Could the chilly wind
Shake the faraway rainbow?

Floating clouds,
Travelling over the sky
With some lazy sorrow.

Across the Pacific Ocean,
Turned into Spring breeze,
To the country old,

Warmth surounded,
Speaking of my heart,
Whispers in your shadow.

Molecules and atoms,
I am turning into,
In the air around you.

Feel,
The vibrations of my heart,
Could you?

[This message has been edited by Laoha (03-29-2003 02:43 AM).]

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-03-28 08:48 AM


Very nice thoughts, Laoha...
Goldboat
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2 posted 2003-03-28 11:43 AM


Very good poem!
Goldboat
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3 posted 2003-03-28 11:45 AM


Vote!
Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-03-28 03:41 PM


pretty piece
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-03-28 03:46 PM


Well done..Vote is in!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-03-28 09:53 PM


wonderful images Laoha
Laoha
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7 posted 2003-03-29 02:23 AM


Nan and Brad: Thanks for the encouragements.

Goldboat and Enchantress: Thanks for the votes.

Aenimal: Glad you like it. I am learning to use more images instead.

Justbleu
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8 posted 2003-04-12 07:17 PM


Nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


carol
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9 posted 2003-04-12 09:14 PM


Bridgette,very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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