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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
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Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-03-27 10:09 PM


Inner Space and Inner Peace,
Perpetual Shadow that will not cease
Lost in thought, Lost in time
The outside world, covered in grime

Silence echoes louder than words
Unspoken in the deadly silence
That follows ever swifter
After the durance

A silken touch, and kindly word
Like a needle's prick bring pain
That I still cherish
A dance in the rain...

http://www.heisen.net  Peace Through War, it is beginning!


© Copyright 2003 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-27 10:12 PM


Well done Samson...Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-03-28 07:50 AM


Dance on, this is sad but beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2003-03-28 08:25 PM


DragonFang...Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Dance
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since 2003-03-28
Posts 34

4 posted 2003-03-30 12:29 PM


Love it.
~*~DANCE~*~


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2003-03-31 04:59 PM


Dragon - ahhh to dance in the rain . . .  you will once again - very nice xxoo
Pascal
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 54
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2003-03-31 05:56 PM


Very nice. I enjoyed this immensely. Dancing in the rain does it for me.

Pascal  

[This message has been edited by Pascal (03-31-2003 05:56 PM).]

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