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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-03-27 09:32 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

You are the bird of my paradise
The wind beneath my wings
Every color of the rainbow
And the different shades it brings

The light of my life
The spring in my step
The jewel in my crown
The paint in my palette

You are the river in my dreams
The burning ember in my fire
The whisper through the trees
You're the one my heart desires

My heart grows ever fonder
From the seeds of love you sow
Many things you are to me
I just wanted you to know

* * * *

"Love ......'tis second life,
it grows into the soul,
warms every vein, and
beats in every pulse."

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-27 09:37 PM


Very beautiful as always Sue!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

regards2you
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Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-03-27 09:48 PM



Sue,

This is just beautiful. Enjoyed.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-03-27 10:13 PM


The "denouements" at the end of your poems always tie  up your poems so nicely--and your selection of graphics fit your poetry perfectly!

Warm hugs,
Linda

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2003-03-27 11:25 PM


Another beautiful write from you.

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (03-27-2003 11:26 PM).]

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-03-27 11:32 PM


Suetang - your romantic poems are showing a heart of you, tender it is when I read your writings... my vote is cast...

BC

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6 posted 2003-03-27 11:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and you are a very talented poet with a golden heart that will always shine with love and poetry and will find the love you deserve! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this has my happy vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Trillium
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7 posted 2003-03-28 01:37 PM


Sue:  Romantic and lovely!

Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (03-28-2003 01:38 PM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
8 posted 2003-03-28 05:51 PM


Hi Sue, wonderful, wonderful ....

hugs for peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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9 posted 2003-03-28 06:38 PM


Sue~
Totally exquisite !

'My heart grows ever fonder
From the seeds of love you sow'


*sighhhhhhhh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Larry C
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10 posted 2003-03-28 10:07 PM


You always have a nice touch Sue. Lovely as always.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

catalinamoon
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11 posted 2003-03-28 10:56 PM


Sue, how beautiful. And the picture matched so well.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-03-29 05:28 PM


Its nice to have someone to love and to appreciate...James
littlewing
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13 posted 2003-03-29 10:45 PM


Sue - you put this here for me didnt you?  hehehehe lol:

"Love ......'tis second life,
it grows into the soul,
warms every vein, and
beats in every pulse."


what a bright soul you have xxoo

Mon Cherie
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14 posted 2003-05-03 12:08 PM


This is so sweet!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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displaced
15 posted 2003-05-10 05:18 AM


wow! wow
SimplyGold
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16 posted 2003-05-26 04:31 PM


Suetang,

Catching up and loving this poem. Full of spirit.  Thanks,
SG

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